hmmmmm gettin there... but not quite
The idea is good and fresh... but it lacks something.... it isnt full enough.. sounds good... but a little amatuer in some spots if you get me.... too repetitve... use more riffs to link it together.. and drum rolls man.. u need drum rolls... please dont take this as negative feedback.. just honest advice.... but keep trying you will get there man...... next time use more then 2 or 3 so riffs :P Variety is what keeps us listening...
Nice attempt...... Good potential