Have you thought about changing the key of the song to minor instead of major? I think it you give you a much better sound and will hit the spot a lot more. The production is there but the downfall is.. so is the cheese. So cheesy bro.... try changing it to a minor key.. I bet the result will blow your mind.

I like this.. Very cool!! I like the note progression and the glitchie sounds. Very cool! When the beat dropped it it sounded awesome. Kind of Nine inch nailsesque to me (If thats even a thing haha). Id listen to this for sure! Would very much suit a game! I enjoyed listening to this! TY for the heads up.

Cool song bro!! Noticed your song sitting above mine in the New Wave charts and I thought.. now there is a guy I havent seen for a while!! Liked your song bro! Check out my song Fate of One its ranked just under this... This had some rad funk to it and made me wanna chill back with a few women and some scotch and just see where it takes us!! hahahahahaha :P